Okay so over all I really like this picture. I love the location. Any time you can find places like this to shoot they are always fun. The lighting is great. I like the shadow beyond the bars. It feels a little sinester. I like the contrast between your background and the models outfit, kind of a old hard edge meet soft modern curves. The model herself seems a little stiff in the pose though. The way she is standing just doesn't feel natural. That being said she is a very attractive model. Her facial expression is great. All in all I would say this is wondeful.